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KINGSGUARD Chapter 35: A Deserved Rest

Discussion in 'Writer's Corner' started by Marco Polo, Sep 5, 2018.

  1. Marco Polo

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    I didn’t take it as a bad thing, really. If he comes across as arrogant right now that’s fine, I obviously look at the character differently since I’m writing him, and I haven’t finished building him up yet so maybe that’s how readers see him

    He’s too intelligent to not have those moments - he’s probably the most booksmart character in the series so far
     
  2. Kia

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    But I think it’s only because he’s actually interacting with the other characters that he’s having any growth at all. You can be super booksmart and be an idiot about the things that matter at the same time. Grinnington is starting to try not to be such an idiot it seems. ^_^
     
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    A deserved rest indeed :)

    Nice transition @Marco Polo , so training huh? Beach, camping, river fishing, campfire stories? Hmmm. Noice <3 with Marko tho, maybe some twist. Hahhaha. I, personally love those things I enumerated, xD. Though I'm not a good swimmer, I just kinda float. lol. It'd be nice if we have more KG join this excursion.
     
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    I think it's sweet that you associate physical training with campfire stories

    I'm sure Chirch and Rose would much rather sit around a campfire than do Marko's training...
     
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    I'm gonna say again that those chapters of cooling down are my favourite kind^^
    Reading about Amanda and Grinnington I remembered something that I did when I was 16. I fancied a girl in my class and one day we went out as a group with my friends and her friends. Next day she said to me "You looked really handsome yesterday" and all I said to her was "ok"...
    -_- Not even a thank you *retard*
    Anyway, the chapter was very nice, full of laughs, and in the end a build up for the summer camp which I can't wait to read about!

    Also nice OP easter egg, Captain de Polaris ;)
     
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    So when is some wonderful artist going to start drawing these chapters up for us??? lol
     
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    That’s what I’d like to know
     

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