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The Phantom of the OPF

Discussion in 'Writer's Corner' started by Grin, Aug 25, 2016.

  1. Grin

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    Dedicated to @Phantom's life long pursuit of being the main character of OPF, I made him the main character of this little opera. It might sound familiar somehow.

    ***

    Grinstine:

    In PMs he sang to me

    In polls he tops

    Those threads that call for me and spell my dreams

    The Phantom of the OPF is there

    Inside my mind

    Phantom:

    Shitpost again with me

    Our strange duet

    My like ratio over you

    Grows stronger yet

    And though you turn from me to unfollow

    The Phantom of the OPF is there

    Inside your mind

    Grinstine:

    Those who have seen your threads

    Blacklist in fear

    I am the one who cares

    Phantom:

    I AM HERE

    Both:

    Your/My shitposting and my/your threads in one combined

    The Phantom of the OPF is there/here inside your/my mind~

     
  2. Mapache

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    This is beautiful, my heart is touched, tears have flown. If you read between the lines you can feel the unique relationship between those two characters even more and it seems even more intense. Furthermore, the metrics of this piece of art are stunningly well arranged and fit the content perfectly. I can't find anything to criticise here, it's just beautiful.
     
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  3. Chaudfontaine

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    Oh Phantom, wherefore art thou Phantom?
     
  4. Red

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    Ya see...

    Oh goddamit. C'mere, Grin, ya beautiful bastard *kiss*

    [​IMG]
     
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    ......... pure gold..... I find it interesting how I actually followed the musics rhythm.
     
  6. Date Damon

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    I would be lying if i said i understood any of this.
     
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    @Grin, see what I mean?
     
  8. Grin

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    Motherfucker :tired:
     
  9. Christina Choi

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    i don't know what i just read but it was well written. :)
     
  10. Grin

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    Parody on Phantom of the Opera.
     
  11. Date Damon

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    shouldve told us sooner. Ive read it before. Erik kinda similar to Phantom, always sneak up on the ladies but always scare them off lol.
     
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    I scare the girls away? :O
     
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  13. Date Damon

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    Sanji, I mean Sanji. Wait, youre not Sanji?
     
  14. Red

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    At least the mermaids liked me
     
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  15. Date Damon

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    man somehow it is fixed in my mind that you are Sanji. No joke.
     
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  16. Christina Choi

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    Oh ok i get it. Lol Phantom of the OPF ok.
     
  17. AkainuWrrshiprr

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    Perfect....a few more posts and people will be thinking I am Akainu.
     
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  18. Grin

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    CHEST be yourself, that's the HOLE idea. I'm sure you'll ACE this. I LAVA what you do already.
     
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  19. AkainuWrrshiprr

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    Hahaha...now that's poetry!
     
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    Now you should make this one:
     

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